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(10ASP - 2411) Unsanctioned missions... (PG)
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I"m liking this series of stories. YOu're very focused on characters and actions, but I'd enjoy seeing a little more of the 'scenery' - talking more about the area where they are in the scene.s You do it sometimes, so you clearly have your mind's eye of the locations, but we don't.

But the stories are coming along nicely!
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RE: (10ASP - 2411) Unsanctioned missions... (PG) - by brawndo_mom - 11-16-2020, 12:48 AM

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