11-23-2020, 10:31 PM
Wow! That writing was almost lyrical! Lovely job of describing the characters - and the character of characters. Great visuals for the people and the scene!!! NIcely done - and the story is great as well!
(18ASP- 2419) Running (Part 1) Pg-13
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(18ASP- 2419) Running (Part 1) Pg-13 - by greaterfrost - 11-21-2020, 09:42 PM
RE: (18ASP- 2419) Running (Part 1) Pg-13 - by brawndo_mom - 11-23-2020, 10:31 PM
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