[greaterfrost]

I'm interested to learn more, I'm not sure how your story is going whether you are prepared to reveal any additional information, but I was a bit shocked that they would set up a mock raid to set up a captain on her birthday.  I mean it makes sense when you think about it, but on the other hand what's with the nerves?  it's not like it's a sad experience or is it?  I guess I don't know enough about your storyline to make any kind of a judgment call.

I'd like to know more about bubbles, buttercup, and blossom, it might be a good rivalry/collab.  I like the cohesion of the characters. 

thanks for the fanfic I enjoyed it thus far, I'd like to see much more.